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Once apon a time, there was a girl. This perticular girl was named Brianna, though most folks called her Bree. Bree lived in a small town all her life and most of the time she was quite happy to do so. She had friends that as she got older, grew imensely in number. At the age of about twenty one, Bree's life would change forever. She found a good friend, or so she thought in a girl named Josie. She met Josie through another good friend, wendy. Now for a while, Wendy Bree and Josie, were inseperable, much to the dismay, and annoyance of wendy's boyfriend, Sid. Anyway, Josie and Bree thought it would be best, being friends and all, to get a place together. So they did, even bringing another friend of Bree's, Mary, to live with them. Now, thing's between Josie and a male friend of Bree's, Kyle, started to get, romantic. But, despite Bree feeling overjoyed for her friends, Josie was convinced Bree was trying to sabotaged things for the two. So Bree and Josie grew apart, and that began Bree's spiral into depression. She drank heavily every night, had constant panic attacks, and cried, often. But she would not be lost for long. At the wedding of Sid and Wendy, she met a great guy. His name was Jake, and he went as far as sleeping in her bed, the very night they met. within days they had started a relationship, and Bree was overjoyed once again. This story has not yet reached a conclusion, for it is happening as I type this. As of now Bree is depressed once again, except for the few moments she gets to be with Jake. She is becoming increasingly wary of Mary, who may be trying to sabotage things with Jake, as Bree was accused of doing to Josie. I had the pleasure of speaking with Bree recently, and she's not doing too well. She just wants everything to be great again, like the days she spent with Wendy and Josie. Do I think she's depressed enough to consider suicide? No, Jake saw to that, I'm fairly sure. But I do worry about her, she's a great girl, but she's hit a rough patch, and she feels alone. What do I tell her? How do I make her see how great she does have it? I just want her to ba happy again. and your advice on how to conclude the story is greatly appriciated. Those that are involved that can read this, which is pretty much just Kyle, don't say anything about this, especially to Josie. I doubt Bree wants anyone to know.
©2008-2009 ~Fierce-Wolf
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Well... It's a fine mess she's in now

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:icondragonnetstorm:
Is this about THE Kyle? And the other names, are they fictive or based off real people? (and just names covered) Nice story though, but rather, shortcutting... You could've put allot more atmosphere in the story.

I hope things will turn out fine with the people mentioned though, it sounds like allot of shite is going on over there...

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-My signature is written in the stars-

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Quotes:
'Conserve energy -- make love more slowly.'
'Enjoy every minute. There's plenty of time to be dead.'
'For good people to do bad thing, it takes religion.'
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Kyle really has not much to do with it, though yes it is THE kyle. that should answer the other questions as well.

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HA HA... Mine is an evil Laugh
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If you read a book in public, just so people will think you're smart... That makes you a Jackass!
:icondragonnetstorm:
It answers part of it, but did you just cover up the names or are they people I've never met? Becouse if you didn't and Bree is who I think it is, I am not gonna be happy. Though by reading it again, its a group of friends I've never met by the looks of it. I do hope that the Bree person finds happyness again. And that the people living together will stop bopping eachother. XD

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-My signature is written in the stars-

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Quotes:
'Conserve energy -- make love more slowly.'
'Enjoy every minute. There's plenty of time to be dead.'
'For good people to do bad thing, it takes religion.'
:iconfierce-wolf:
She says "thanks"

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HA HA... Mine is an evil Laugh
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If you read a book in public, just so people will think you're smart... That makes you a Jackass!
:icondragonnetstorm:
I'm confused, who is this about now? XD Is the name Bree her real name? (strange shortcut, but okay) And she is most welcome, whoever she is. XD

GOD I hate being confused. But good luck with getting them happy again. Damn I am almost glad I pulled out of there, hearing all this shit going on.

By the way, I still feel sorry for Shane, the poor guy must not know what to do with his feelings. Do you know if he still visits DA, becouse I sended him a note but he doesn't replie to it...

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-My signature is written in the stars-

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Quotes:
'Conserve energy -- make love more slowly.'
'Enjoy every minute. There's plenty of time to be dead.'
'For good people to do bad thing, it takes religion.'

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